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Criterion
Score

4

3

2

1

Content

Writer
clearly understands both the content of the chapter and the
characters involved.

Writer
understands most the content of the chapter and the characters
involved.

Writer
shows some understanding of the content of the chapter and the
characters involved.

Writer
shows little or no understanding of the content of the chapter
or the characters involved.

Structure

Rewrite
follows order and plot of original scene, with a few creative
elements added.

Rewrite
follows order of original scene and all important plot details
are present.

Rewrite
follows basic order of original scene, but important plot
details are missing.

Rewrite
leaves out key elements of the original scene, both in plot and
sequence.

Voice

Chosen
character’s attributes show in actions and dialogue and match
up to original story.

Chosen
character’s attributes show in actions and dialogue and match
up (with minor differences) to original story.

Chosen
character’s original attributes show slightly in actions or
dialogue.

Chosen
character’s original attributes do not show in actions or
dialogue.

Point
of View

Rewrite
uses first-person point of view consistently and reveals chosen
character’s thoughts and feelings in detail.

Rewrite
uses first-person point of view and reveals chosen character’s
thoughts and feelings.

Rewrite
does not use first-person point of view or uses it
inconsistently and reveals some of the chosen character’s
thoughts and feelings.

Rewrite
does not use first-person point of view or uses it
inconsistently and does not reveal chosen character’s
thoughts and feelings.

Mechanics

No
errors in spelling and grammar.
(Grammar
errors allowed in dialogue if character attribute calls for
it.)

Few
errors in spelling and grammar.

Occasional
errors in spelling and grammar.

Many
errors in spelling and grammar.