evaluation essay on sumsung smart tv

i neeei sentence for topic

4 sentence for supporting evidence

1 sentence for concluding sentence

for each of the 4 body paragraph and

3-4 sentences of background information with one sentence thesis and 4 sentense conclusion

i have two documents in below one is my rough draft esay and the professor essay whay she need. my due date is tomorrow please help with good esssay

minimum 2 pages and maximum 4