Boston Tea Party

I submitted an essay proposal and I need to resubmit the proposal before I can have the essay completed. I will attach the document I submitted, all I need is for the proposal to be changed slightly to fit the instructors guidelines. His feedback was to avoid writing “in this paper” and what is the argument? What is my main point? I realized that I may not have submitted a complete assignment which is where I need that extra assistance. The topic was only chosen to fit in the category of American History before 1877. I am open to any suggestions you may have if you think the topic itself needs to be changed. Thank You for your help!