Data Science Personal Statement for grad program

Please upload a document briefly describing your background, as well as your academic and professional goals. Outline your previous experience with data science, what you hope to learn from this program, your career goals after graduation. should be be a max of 1 page. 500-1500 words.
a few things about me-
-Both Parents born in Nigeria, I am the youngest of 5 siblings who all carry bachelors degrees. I recently graduated with a B.S in Finance from Florida Gulf Coast University in May of 2020. In October of 2020, i began my first job as a Mortgage Loan processor. In my year working at Community Loan Servicing I have noticed the ongoing process to make loan, origination, underwriting and processing simpler by using data provided by Ellie Mae to automate certain processes. Big data provides infomration as to competition, faster processing of applications, understanding borrowers segments, detecting fraud and mitigating risk. machine learning contributes to accessories such as chatbots on lender websites. These processess themselves have been much more intriguing to be than the actual tasks if my day to day job. As i work i find myself asking, how can i do my work most efficently. I have very minimal python background but I am currently enrolled in the IBM data sceince course on Coursea. i hope to get a good foundation of the basic programming language and exactly what data science is. my goal is to recieve a M.S in Data Science in order to understand how this world of Big data is operated. this will allow me to be a huge asset and help to the company I work for whether it be protecting there data or create models and predictive analysis that can help improve the overall flow of the busniess and customer relations. upon graduation, i would like to pusrue a career as a Data engineer or a Cyber security analyst.