Lake Waconia in Carver County Lake

Show how to convert to TSI and what trophic state the lake is in. Address all of my comments and you can send the next draft to me by 11:59 pm Friday to improve your score. Please click on the link below to see your scores:

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ey have a wide choice of mixes on draft in differing styles. What’s more, don’t miss Enki Brewing, only a couple of miles east in Victoria. Appreciate a half quart in their pub or bring home a growl
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
this is out of place, you’re writing a lake report on the lake and what’s happening near it. It’s good you mention there’s a lot of microbreweries, but you don’t have to advertise for the company (growler, etc.)
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
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facilities for what? you don’t have a transition to this part, you need to tell the story in a “smooth”; way
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
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great history. but you need to make sure to cite your references
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
Different inns in Waconia concentrated principally on serving vacationers after they landed from a steamboat, fuel dispatch, dinghy or sail pontoon, giving pleasantries, for example, lobbies to drinking and moving amid the late spring season. Two of these foundations were the Sherman House (1882) and the North Star Hotel (ca 1885). It is obscure to what extent these inns worked all things considered, however both structures were town down in 1977 (Lahr et al 1986, 32-36). It must be seen that 1977 was not an extraordinary year for old structures in Waconia, with the Lake House, Sherman House, and the North Star Hotel all meeting the destroying ball.
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
Huh? That’s the reason you picked Lake Waconia? Why did you choose the lake to study over other lakes? (I made a mistake, I chose it because my teacher suggests chossing it because Lake tahoe in california has not enouh information)
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
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how do you use a secchi disc?
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
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I’m lost–what does this table mean? You’re explaining what total phosphorus is (limiting nutrient) then BOOM! I see this table? What are you trying to say with this table in the phosphorus section?
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
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what is ArcGIS? Explain in your words and why we are doing this Explain what is happening in each map in your own words I gave you 18/20 for lake data because you have all the maps, but you need to explain what’s happening in each map in your own words. Don’t cut and paste text from other references–use YOUR OWN data and explain in YOUR OWN words
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
what is the watershed: lake ratio? This is why your watershed score is 14/20
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
legend for the land use map is needed–what do all the colors mean?
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago

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I do not understand this legend, B-1, etc. why aren’t you using your OWN land use map?
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago
I don’t understand this
Daniel Lundberg – 6 hours ago

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Please redo–write a new 3-4 pages.