If there are areas that need to be more elaborated or are not clear, please fix that as well. Overall, the paper needs to be thoroughly revised and adhere to university or post-grad readability and be devoid of grammar and punctuational mistakes. The in-text citations and the References page are likely incorrect, so you’ll have to fix those as well. Instructions to the assignment are attached, my course notes, essay writing modules that may aid you, as well as a rubric to help you ensure if all of the criteria have been met and if the paper, itself, exceeds an A . This paper should be taken very seriously as it is a summative worth a great percentage of my overall mark. If you do have any questions or concerns regarding the order, feel free to let me know and I will respond back as soon as possible.